I believe the youthful spirit is essential to enjoy one’s own life even in difficulties. Although some people attribute youth to their ages and appearances, I believe youth is a gift of living with an active spirit to challenge their weakness to improve themselves. Based on my definition of youth, I think the youth have more advantages than the elderly do because they have more open-minded perspectives and boundless energy. Therefore, I agree that younger people enjoy life more than older people do, considering these advantages that this essay will explore.
First, I think younger people are more willing to learn new things than older people, which promotes a sense of fulfillment to grow. Since the youth have less experience and knowledge, they are more likely to be free from prejudice and self-conscious that prevent people from trying unfamiliar things. However, as people get older, they tend to neglect to seek new opportunities to learn because they tend to focus more on success and fear failure. Due to their restricted mindsets and self-consciousness, they value their reputations from others rather than opportunities to grow. Therefore, I believe younger people can feel a sense of fulfillment through learning than older people do because the youth appreciate new opportunities to improve themselves.
Second, younger people can benefit from their boundless energy and vitality to challenge themselves. For example, when I was a high school student, I often stayed up all night with friends to study for exams. However, now my body feels tired even before midnight, which sups my motivation to study at night. Likewise, because of the physical advantages of the youth, they are full of vitality to trust in their potential and try overcoming their limits.
Despite these advantages of the youth, older people can also enjoy life as long as they live with such youthful spirits to grow. I believe mindset matters more than ages to whether people can enjoy life since I know many elderlies who never cease to learn from others to improve themselves. On the other hand, if the youth lack an active mindset for learning, they hardly identify the opportunities to grow and they will complain about their life.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that the youth enjoy life more than older people do because of two advantages shown above. Free from prejudice and self-consciousness, the youth are more likely to take advantage of new opportunities to grow. Besides, abundant energy and vitality allow the youth to broaden their horizons through overcoming their weakness. However, it is also important to consider that age does not necessarily limit their potentials to develop but the mindset does.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, likewise, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83782565318 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1912683285 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.4 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30932659327 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118814749587 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138500613593 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202718907168 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985558828104 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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