Who enjoys much, a youngster or an older person is surely a matter of debate as it depends on the personally mental, physical, and social state. However, I think, with my personal experience, a young individual will enjoy more than an old person. Young people have better health, less responsibilities as well as so much energy to have fun. That is the reason why, I think, a young will cherish the moments more than an older one.
It is quite evident that a younger person will have less burnden of responsibilities of family, society they will be able to enjoy more. We all know that to them they have their parents who can take care of the responsibilities, that is why these youngsters will have liberty to go anywhere and have fun. They can go an tour, party, can hangout with the friends. However, as much as we grow old our concern towards children, wife, parents, and also society increases. If I take an example of my own life I have noticed that till the time I was student or even during the first few years of my job, I was having so much fun like; going out with friends, planning weekends to do something special such as going on trip, having night out with friends. But now I'm realizing that I have feelings like I should save money for my family and for my future. We have many other kinds of planning in our mind such as building a house, nuying a car, having other assest like land. That is why I think as we grow old, we be able to relish the life less enthusiastically.
Moreover, with the increase in age, our body starts atrophying and become less responsive. We prefer to take rest instead of going out, doing get together, or even parties with family members. I have seen one of my uncles, uncle Budh, during my childhood we used to have so much fun, we were going daily to play cricket, for fishing, for cycling. We used to have competition that wo is getting more runs in the cricket game, or who is catching more fish or even who is riding the cicycle faster. Nonetheless, now whenever I go to my home town and I ask him that uncle lets recollect those memories again, is response will be, no son my age is not that now. He says thathis body cramps if he do some physical activities, also he says that now is bones and musceles are not as strong as these used to be a few years back. Similarlly, I have seen many old peolpe, whom I know, used to be physically so active one decade back, whereas not they are not even able to walk 1km, everyone's response would be, that now they can have funs and now their rest of the life is written inside the home. By seeing their response I have construed that they can have fun as much as they could do when they were young.
By all above citations I aver that, age matters a lot in relishing the life. The reason behind such degrade in the activities could be anything, whether be it responsibilities or less vigorous and robust body. After a certain age people become less engaging and savour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun responsibilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...erson. Young people have better health, less responsibilities as well as so much ene...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...o go anywhere and have fun. They can go an tour, party, can hangout with the frien...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... having night out with friends. But now Im realizing that I have feelings like I s...
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Line 5, column 692, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... now. He says thathis body cramps if he do some physical activities, also he says ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, well, whereas, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2418.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 552.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38043478261 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48071484148 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485507246377 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6719379019 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.130434783 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129073415349 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044290584643 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467751821013 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958297097264 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063078108444 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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