Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, the old enjoy life much more than the young. Young people have their youth and the boundless energy that goes with it, but the elderly have their wisdom, their experience and, often, the financial resources to live life to the fullest.
Because older people have lived longer than young people, they have accumulated a wealth of knowledge that gives them the wisdom to do things the right way, and the right way for them is easy to decide as they have the experience to know what works and what doesn’t work. They know full well what kind of activities they enjoy and how to enjoy them. Life is less of a trial and error for them and more of a certainty that what they are going to do will bring great enjoyment.
A second reason why older people enjoy life more is their mountains of experience. When they travel or choose a restaurant, they have a wide array of choices that they have tried in the past. They know what to do or where to go for a specific occasion or a specific mood. They are less likely to make mistakes. This is not to say that they will never have a bad meal or use a horrible hotel by surprise, but if they do they are likely to know how to alleviate the situation unlike young people who may have no other choice.
A third reason why the old have more fun than the young is their financially stability. More often than not, the old who are in retirement age can relax, work less, and have the funds to continue enjoying themselves. They can travel to new places or old ones that they’ve visited in the past, and they can stay at nicer, fancier hotels. It’s true that not everyone who retires is financially ready or well off; however, if they are not ready financially, they will usually have developed a lifestyle that allows them to live comfortably within their means and still enjoy some of the finer things in life. Besides, when you are that age, you can take advantage of senior discounts that can help you enjoy life more.
Because of their wisdom, knowledge, and financial readiness, I strongly believe that older people enjoy life much more the young.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
...ably within their means and still enjoy some of the finer things in life. Besides, when you...
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Suggestion:
...unts that can help you enjoy life more. Because of their wisdom, knowledge, and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, second, so, still, third, well, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54805194805 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29520755849 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472727272727 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9800695854 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284887138545 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120318348597 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922901652554 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200271065676 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048377460165 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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