Summarize points in the lecture being sure to explain how they oppose specific points made in reading passage
Altruism is a selfless act which is done by any animal. Altruism is doing something without expecting anything in return. Lecture states that in any field new findings often cast a doubt on old beliefs and findings.
The passage mentions that the Sentinel meerkat stands guard and looks out for predators while other meerkats hunt for food or are eating food. The passage states this as an act of altruism but lecture states that on further research it is seen that the sentinel meerkat eat before guard. So, the sentinel meerkat is full stomach when they are guarding so this cannot be considered as an act of altruism.
Secondly, the passage state that, the sentinel meerkat alarms other meerkats in case of any danger. The sentinel meerkat has to flee alone and puts itself in great danger. But lecture oppose this by saying that, the sentinel meerkat is the first one to know about the approaching predator and can escape easily as in most cases he is guarding near the burrow and can flee easily. In case of any danger all the meerkats come together or else start running, this distracts the attention of the predator from the sentinel meerkat and it can flee easily into the burrow.
Thirdly, the passage mentions that in case of humans, donation of body parts among family members or even strangers is considered as an altruistic act but lecture the states that if a human donate a kidney to a stranger or a family member he/she receives appreciation in return and he/she feels self-worth about him/her so this cannot be considered as a act of altruism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...him/her so this cannot be considered as a act of altruism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, as to, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77941176471 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40087885797 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.1534283888 49.2860985944 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721976893306 0.272083759551 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299097799375 0.0996497079465 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249447622004 0.0662205650399 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449084003488 0.162205337803 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181291457063 0.0443174109184 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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