Young people enjoy life more than older people do.Do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o another but if I were forced to choose,I would definitely state that young peopl...
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...tely state that young people enjoy more as compared to old people.It is my firm be...
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...le enjoy more as compared to old people.It is my firm belief that young people ten...
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...nd enthusiasm as compared to old people.At an young age everyone is curious to try...
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...enthusiasm as compared to old people.At an young age everyone is curious to try ne...
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...ave great urge to experience new things.Though they might not have money or enough res...
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...have money or enough resource but still try and enjoy their life.I have to admit that m...
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...urce but still try and enjoy their life.I have to admit that my opinion on this m...
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...nfluenced by my own personal experience.You see , even though college students do n...
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...ed by my own personal experience.You see , even though college students do not hav...
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...ough college students do not have money try and celebrate each moment of their college ...
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...brate each moment of their college life.They try their best to make each and every m...
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...to make each and every moment memorable.As a result many of them in future do not ...
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...e they tend to cherish that very moment.For this reason I feel that young adults en...
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...t young adults enjoy more. Secondly , I even feel that old people lose intere...
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...hings not just because of lack in energy , but also because they must have experie...
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...ienced all those things at an early age.Drawing from my own experience , there was a ti...
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...early age.Drawing from my own experience , there was a time when my grandfather us...
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...ch no matter what were the circumstances , but now he does not even like to talk a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, i feel, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71612903226 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39670135283 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.1344086022 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 379.034629025 48.9658058833 774% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 365.5 100.406767564 364% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.5 20.6045352989 376% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.45110844103 440% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266293617134 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17555025067 0.076458572812 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845877424131 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173970630122 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857980877048 0.0645574589148 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.6 11.7677419355 337% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 58.1214874552 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.1 10.1575268817 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.28 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.002688172 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.0537634409 326% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 10.247311828 322% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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