Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree?
No one can deny that there can be many opinion on the statement whether young people enjoy life more that old people. The opinion may vary from one person to another but if I were forced to choose,I would definitely state that young people enjoy more as compared to old people.It is my firm belief that young people tend to live their life to the fullest and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs
To begin with, young people have more energy and enthusiasm as compared to old people.At an young age everyone is curious to try new things and have great urge to experience new things.Though they might not have money or enough resource but still try and enjoy their life.I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience.You see , even though college students do not have money try and celebrate each moment of their college life.They try their best to make each and every moment memorable.As a result many of them in future do not hesitate to share their college life and even while sharing their experience they tend to cherish that very moment.For this reason I feel that young adults enjoy more.
Secondly , I even feel that old people lose interest in many things not just because of lack in energy , but also because they must have experienced all those things at an early age.Drawing from my own experience , there was a time when my grandfather used to watch every single match no matter what were the circumstances , but now he does not even like to talk about cricket matches and would only criticize the new game format.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons I strongly believe that they are many important factor due to which old people do not enjoy their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, i feel, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71612903226 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39670135283 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.1344086022 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 379.034629025 48.9658058833 774% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 365.5 100.406767564 364% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.5 20.6045352989 376% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.45110844103 440% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266293617134 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17555025067 0.076458572812 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845877424131 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173970630122 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857980877048 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.6 11.7677419355 337% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 58.1214874552 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.1 10.1575268817 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.28 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.002688172 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.0537634409 326% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 10.247311828 322% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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