I don't agree with statement that parents are the best teacher. Thus, I have two reasons for this statement.
First, many parents don't have didatic to teatch their childrens, and the teachers has all a preparation to teach and this is fundamental.
For example, when I was a children, I had many difficult to learn math, and when my parents tryed teatched me, did make me more confuse, since they don't have didatic to teatche me. Beside that, the professor learn to teach of many ways, consequently teatch well the students.
Second, the teachers have many supplementary material that help their students. Theses supplementary materials is necessary to a good teatch, and this make evident when I saw my brother. for instance, my brother João, had many difficult to study biology, and when he was in the highschool, he has difficut to learn botany. I remenber that he was studing the classification of plants (bryophytes, pteridophytes, gimminosperms and flowers plant) he was with many difficut and their teatcher show for him a supplementary material that showed the evoluition of these plants, with many pictures and the relation of evolution. It was like magic, my brother learn very well and he was good in the test.
In conclusion, I prefer suty with a professor than my parents, and i think it's better, since the teatcher can learn of many ways and make esyer to student, and get more materal supplementary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9539748954 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88872062519 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518828451883 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6903422409 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.636363636 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0685145092556 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341506829383 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378153711045 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564276812965 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436112407325 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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