Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Who would you choose? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
considering the best well-known person in my country to build a particular monument to honor, I am strongly inclined to signify the teacher entitled Baghcheban who expends lots of time to bring up the maim students. Being one of the most proliferated topics in all societies, the critical role of teachers cannot be ignored. With respect to this point, teaching the students with the physical disabling can be taken into account as the industrious profession. Needless to say, honoring the person who devotes all of his life in this discipline can be contributed as the positive achievement. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the position of all teachers in all societies can be considered as the special profession. As the developed country is composed of the developed people who are educated perfectly well by professional teachers, the significance of teachers become crystal clear. The social studies put emphasis on the fact that in one country, there is causal relationship between the level of development on the one hand and the level of education on the other hand. regarding teachers as the pivot of all education systems, the necessity of appraising teachers is crucial. In addition, the excavated historical findings reveal, the dignity of a teacher as a person who introduce the society to the children and teach them how behave in the society was high. Therefore, it is unquestionable to give a credit to a teacher who do that significant job.
Another primary reason can be attributed to the great and fundamental job of the teacher in my country. As pointed out in the introduction, he devoted his life to teach the maim children. it goes without saying that the education of the children who have the deficiency in learning and doing their routine tasks needs a considerable attention compared with normal children. it is indispensable for the teachers to have a remarkable proficiency in multiple area such as psychological, medical, and social sciences when it comes to maim students. For instance, an effective mutual relationship with a child who cannot speak, hear or even see clearly needs the particular expertise. it is also worth noting that the behavior with the maim children should be done in the way that they do not feel any deficiency compared with other normal children. Thus, the job of Mr. Bagcheban can be contributed as the one of the most critical occupation among other vacations.
Taking all of these perspectives into account, I cannot agree more about building the monument of the teacher in my country regarding the importance of the teacher position in all societies and the significance of bringing up maim students. However, although there are lots of critical jobs which play a positive role in development of my country, in my opinion none of them can be indicated as the importance of the duty of the described teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2475.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06134969325 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97070787548 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484662576687 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 780.3 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1215026346 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.45 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0734306532298 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261718163924 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293146864753 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508155051645 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269117263693 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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