Your friend is going to reduce the living expenses. Which of the following way would
you recommend to your friend and why?
1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses.
2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.
3. Shop for less expensive food to cook at home.
If my friends come up with situations like financial crisis. I would recommend my friends for living with roommates, the following are my opinnion.
For starters, it’s the most effiecient way for saving money: you can reduce at least 50% of living cost. If you try to reduce buying frequency of technical products or shop less expensive food, it won’t save you too much money and it decrease your living standards. In most cities in the world, the expense for renting house takes up 30% of living expense while for most people, the money spent on food and tech products only takes up 15% of total. One of my friends used to have a tight budget for food and tech products, however by the end of year he found himself didn’t save much money in that way. Then he finded two roomates on the Internet , thus his house rent is much more cheaper. Without keep a tight bugdet on daily expense, he still saves a lot of money.
Moreover, you may gain valuable friendship with your roomates. You will go through thick and thin together and share joy and sorrow at the same time. Sometimes your roomates are the ones you can share your passion with. My roomates and me are good case in point. We both don’t have much aqqutances in the city we currently live and deal with the high stress on work. However, the support we give to each other makes us feel we are the commardrates and it’s definitly nice to have someone to talk with.
Admittedly, roommates living with each other may have fights or quarrels sometimes. It definitely better for us to live alone to avoid seeing the garbage your roommates made or quarreling with a stubborn guy who insists on keeping the window open no matter how cold it is. However, there’s no same leaves on this planet. We can’t expect other be the same with us and can’t avoid living without others, so it’s important for us to fit in with different people and build positive relationship with each other. Living with roommates is an excellent way for us to practice this skill.
In a word, living with roommates can save much money and you can gain precious relationship with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70976253298 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47431542898 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551451187335 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4852345472 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243047622891 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794779305742 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631894072044 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135633570041 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375491698841 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.