Your friend has decided to switch careers but isn’t sure which to choose. What advice would you give them? Provide reasons and examples to support your response.
There is no shortage of opinion on what careers should a person choose when he/she wants to switch to another career. In my opinion, a person should switch to a career that he or she is doing well with it. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, in case my friend wants to switch career, absolutely he doesn’t feel comfortable with what he is doing, that why he wants to switch career. As always, workers do great work and success with the task they handle, when they are comfortable with their job. for example, My bother when he was working in a social organization in our town, he was an active employee and he like his job and everybody in the organization thanked him, a few months later he switches his job to the kurime bank, he told me that he did not like the new job, I noted that from his mood and absence, As a result, my brother decided to return to his old job. For that reason, I think that my friend should choose a career that he feels good about and have experience around it.
Secondly, if my friend decided to change his career path, I would suggest that he go back to the programming path, as always, the best career path encompasses three values, each of which everybody gives a different weight. The work allows him to make enough money, it must be something he is good at it, or it must be something he finds rewarding. For example, when I was a network engineer, I was good at my job and I made plenty of money, but I was not proud of the work I was doing, so I decided to leave the engineering field and came back to programming, the job I feel good and interested whit it. In order to determine which job is the best for him, he should justify between all possible choices according to the previous values.
In summary, if my friend wants to leave his career and doesn’t know which career would be the best for him, he must compare all possible choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...en they are comfortable with their job. for example, My bother when he was working ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, i think, in summary, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34332425068 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40403270002 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476839237057 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5082380188 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.833333333 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5833333333 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129627784591 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676362346404 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561605421717 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10313299775 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216846330807 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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