Your friend has decided to switch careers, but is not sure which to choose. What advice would you give them? Provide reasons and examples to support your response.
In my twenty's, like others, I had a choice between choosing my career of engineering or teacher, which was completely different branch to switch between. At that time I talk with my close friends and family which to choose because I could not choose one of them. Finally, one of my friend suggest me solution to choose one. Hence, I would like to mention the tip that my friend told me once.
First of all, she or he should ask himself which one is makes you more happy and motivated. If you happy and motivated, you will understand the subjects more easily and professionally. Or, if you do not know which one makes you happy, ask your family or friend, they might know you better than you because they observing you from different angle, not the angle you see yourself every day.
Secondly, order the advantages and disadvantages of both career and analyse the results so that she or he can understand which one of more beneficial for him or her. For example, one career might be good for future, like possibility of development is fast but another one is interesting but there are less chance to develop. In this situation, see the other advantages and disadvantages you ordered.
Lastly, in our life time, we spend one of third time on workplace or maybe more time so that choosing right job your lifestyle is important. Henceforth, check whether your job is fitting your lifestyle. Maybe, you love to spend weekend with family but it the job requires you to work weekend, that is breaking your lifestyle. This may be lead to sloping your life-cycle.
In conclusion, I would recommend my friend above three advice for choosing future career. So that he or she would not have regret because she or he chosen their career wisely considering all statement and condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...dvantages you ordered. Lastly, in our life time, we spend one of third time on workplac...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...ace or maybe more time so that choosing right job your lifestyle is important. Hencef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, third, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73548387097 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6204510657 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545161290323 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7492857085 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200846681309 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707267421917 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460520535477 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102626210975 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502967383438 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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