3.American wood company
The article states that more wood company receive ecocertification but reffers U.S. companies that are different. There are several reasons for that and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that american wood company seek ecocertification and refutes each of the author’s reasons.
In the first place, the reading claims that American consumers are exposed advertising. On the other hand, the professor opposes this point by saying that consumer doesn’t treat advertising. They distinguish between advertising about own product and independent critification agancy. Thus American react to wood product.
Second, the article states that ecocritification wood are more expensive than uncritification wood. On the contrast, the professor contends that American consumer cares about price but price determine consumer decision when price of product is high or low than others. The price diffrence between two product is small so American chooses on factors other than price. American notice value of preserving and protecting environment.
Finally, the reading claims that ecocertification is not good business . In contrast, the article refutes this point by stating that wood company pay attention to wood business, of course not for foreign consumer but for foreign comptition. American consumer like ecocertification product. When American company has less customer, foreign company start to manufacture in markets and etc.
- 3.American wood company 60
- 4.Television advertising directed toward young children should not be allowed. 35
- 3.Leaders like John F.Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States.Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice. 60
- 4.Chevalier’s events in memoirSummarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to thespecific points made in the reading passage. 50
more wood company receive ecocertification
more wood companies receive ecocertifications
price determine consumer decision
price determines consumer's decisions
is not good business .
is not a good business .
wood company pay attention
wood companies pay attention
American consumer like ecocertification product.
American consumers like ecocertification products.
Sentence: Thus American react to wood product.
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Suggestion: Refer to American and react
Sentence: The article states that more wood company receive ecocertification but reffers U.S. companies that are different.
Error: reffers Suggestion: refers
Sentence: They distinguish between advertising about own product and independent critification agancy.
Error: critification Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: agancy Suggestion: agency
Sentence: Second, the article states that ecocritification wood are more expensive than uncritification wood.
Error: uncritification Suggestion: ?
Sentence: The price diffrence between two product is small so American chooses on factors other than price.
Error: diffrence Suggestion: difference
Sentence: In contrast, the article refutes this point by stating that wood company pay attention to wood business, of course not for foreign consumer but for foreign comptition.
Error: comptition Suggestion: competition
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