52 hertz whale
The text talks about a specific whale who lives in solitary adn its song is unlike other whales is 52 hertz. Beside it proposes three main argument to explain the reasons of this unique creature. ON the other hand, the professer cast doubt on the cited reasons, categorically refutes all reasons, mentioned the reason of producing this sound is still mysterious.
First, the passage acclaims a theory in which the 52-hertz whale may be a hybrid creature , the child of two different whale type resulted from mixing of two parent's quality of sound. In sharp contrast, the professor reject this notion, point out that it has been proven that hybrid whales travel along side a group of whale. So if it was a hybrid whale, it must travel by a group not alone. So he bbelieves that it is not a hybrid whale.
Second, the writer claims that the whale may own a hearing system with problem, so it have learn to produce sound by copying others whale signs.On the contrary, the woman in the lecture professes that producing high pitch sound calls for strong through with special and unusal charcatristic. In addition, the jearing system has nothing to do with throght and making noise system. So it is not plausible reason that the whale have been breed as a deaf whale or owned damaged hearing system.
Third. the pasage reasing claims that it may be a unique crature and other members of its species may went extinct. The lecture rejects this notion, states that if it was a rare species it must have a parent. Its parents sound should be heared by scientis, but they did not heared such sons. so It is not a unique creature
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| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2022-10-17 | Allenwlh | 53 | view |
| 2021-08-22 | farshad_hom | 88 | view |
| 2021-08-22 | farshadazizi.2012@gmail.com | 65 | view |
| 2021-08-22 | farshad_hom | 60 | view |
| 2021-08-22 | farshad_hom | 65 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... 52-hertz whale may be a hybrid creature , the child of two different whale type r...
^^
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
...s been proven that hybrid whales travel along side a group of whale. So if it was a hybrid...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...wn a hearing system with problem, so it have learn to produce sound by copying other...
^^^^
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...hearing system with problem, so it have learn to produce sound by copying others whal...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...uce sound by copying others whale signs.On the contrary, the woman in the lecture ...
^^
Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...owned damaged hearing system. Third. the pasage reasing claims that it may be a ...
^^^
Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...tis, but they did not heared such sons. so It is not a unique creature Votes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, still, third, in addition, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65397923875 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32391536845 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0154257111 49.2860985944 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309854352629 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103596016869 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130552164197 0.0662205650399 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179631156054 0.162205337803 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130489235092 0.0443174109184 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.