Agree / Disagree it’s a better to work from using computer or telephone rather than working from the office.
In this modern era to survive in cut-through competitions. Work is important part of life. Its help to person buy bred-butter. Works are never end until the people lives. Some people think that working from the office. However, I agree with that statements “a better to work from using computer or telephone”.
To begin with, if people work from using computer or telephone then become feel stress less while in office work are never end. Using computer then people work burden are less because of in computer they can using a new technology. In the office so far so people can stress .For an example, while I working in the office I go so far and I feel stress and I never complete a target of the work. When work in using computer then I took less burden and I never feel stress.
Furthermore, flexibility and more productive. Flexibility is term of not go anywhere and people can work on a computer so they can easily complete a work. People can more productive because of work can independently their own prefer environment. They also more happiness and more productive. For an example, when my father work in office then they not complete a work flexible and he not work independently but they started using computer then they complete his work independently.
Moreover, using computer save time of the work and more skill develop. For an example, when I started using computer then save my time and writing skills are improve
To sum up, using computer is advantage of work complete and less stress of work, they become more productive and flexibility while they using computer and save time. I agree with that statements “a better to work from using computer or telephone”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ended
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Suggestion: ended
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, i feel, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 292.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84589041096 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76390656311 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.393835616438 0.540411800872 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.7272414548 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6111111111 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437370122843 0.272083759551 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186804369075 0.0996497079465 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172620218045 0.0662205650399 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309607377302 0.162205337803 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138906188081 0.0443174109184 313% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.42419426049 76% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 63.6247240618 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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