agree or disagree
In my opinion, being an expert in a restrict field is much better than having a bit of information about everything. I have two main reasons for this, which will explore in the following essay.
First, in our modern world, with the high speed of data transfer, and the increase of researches, we should learn very deep in our fields to be a scholar in that specific area of science. Today, you can easily google what you want, which means having a superficial knowledge of different ideas is very common. Maybe about five hundred years ago, if you had known anything about an area of science, you were the god of that subject. But now, people try to be the best in their modified and special branches of science. In my university, we have about thirty professors. They work in different branches of engineering. Although their fields of working overlap at some points, you can’t find any intersects in their means. We have a famous professor in our department, Dr. Hosseini, who is one of the best researchers in the world in thermodynamic systems. His secret of success is that he has been working many years just in an individual area of thermodynamics.
Second, studying in different fields, especially in our complicated world, makes you confused. If you try to use your brain to handle divergent topics, you will feel perplexed. Neither can’t you understand new lessons nor can’t you be a creative student. We are living in the most hectic, curious and puzzled era, so we should keep our mindsets controlled. One of my friends applied for studying mathematics after the entrance exam of universities. After about two years, he decided to learn literature beside his university, and after six months, he started swim expertly. After a while, he felt puzzled and abolished all of them. His story indicates my reason very well.
In conclusion, I think that working in a modified field is the best choice for our professional lives for two main reasons. A bit of information on divergent topics is not valuable and debilitates your character, and different studies make you confuse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
In my opinion, being an expert in a restrict field is much better than having a bit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 356.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91292134831 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81823198321 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570224719101 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 3.25607064018 491% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7689897865 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2857142857 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 7.06452816374 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 63.6247240618 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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