The reading and listening are about the idea presented by the author in order to save rhinos.The author states that due to the value of the horn(which is tens of thousands of doller per kilogram) more rhinos are going to kill.The author suggests some idea to save rhinos but the Lecturer disagree with all the idea proposed by author.
Firstly,the author posits that using some drugs and surgery, dehorning of rhinos can be possible which can help to prevent hunting.But the professor says that dehoring is neither practical nor good for rhinos. capturing rhinos and do surgery waste a lot of time.Additionally, these horn help rhinos to save their child, their territory and own self.
Also the author notes that educating consumers about the myths related to rhino may improve the demand for the rhino's horn.The professor rebuts about this arguments.He says that a new assumption can not change a strong and old ancient time belief of people.However, this unlikely seems to ineffective for rhinos.
Finally, the author feels that some legal step should be taken by government in order to reduce the horn's demand.Also the buy and selling of rhinos's horn should be legally accepted.The professor disagree with this. He states that legal selling of anything always increase demand for that product.Increasing demand also effect prize.
To sum up both the author and professor have conflicting views about the ways of protecting rhinos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, may, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17521367521 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78911886021 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2018012649 49.2860985944 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.0 110.228320801 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4285714286 21.698381199 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238073317 0.272083759551 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109521998249 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681274084615 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124007156053 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815224173475 0.0443174109184 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.3589403974 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 53.8541721854 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.