The reading and listening are about the hospitability of human on Venus where author claims that it's hard to maintain life on Venus but the lecturer suggest some points that can make a survive on Venus.
Firstly, the author disagree with the chances of survive on Venus by mentioning the atmospheric pressure which is 60 times greater than Earth. Also, it can crushed anything within one hour of landing. The professor rebuts this suggestion by suggesting a physical fact about atmospheric pressure that by establishing floating stations on Venus's surface can manage the pressure on Venus. As higher in the atmosphere, lower in the pressure is well known fact.
Additionally, the author count point of zero survival on Venus by clamming the absence of oxygen, water and atmosphere also. Abundance of carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid erase the possibility of life on Venus. The lecturer suggest that instead of importing, water and oxygen can be produced by the chemical reaction of carbon and sulfuric acid.
Finally, the author mention that possibility of electricity on Venus is null as only 40 percent of sunlight enter in the Venus's cloudy atmosphere. But the professor oppose this suggestion by saying that reflecting stations can be used to reflect the sunlight back to surface. Then by using solar power cells electricity can be produced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nus but the lecturer suggest some points that can make a survive on Venus. Fi...
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...urer suggest some points that can make a survive on Venus. Firstly, the author disag...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'crush'
Suggestion: crush
... times greater than Earth. Also, it can crushed anything within one hour of landing. Th...
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Suggestion:
...ure is well known fact. Additionally, the author count point of zero survival ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...absence of oxygen, water and atmosphere also. Abundance of carbon dioxide, nitrogen ...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...sibility of life on Venus. The lecturer suggest that instead of importing, water and ox...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cells'' or 'cell's'?
Suggestion: cells'; cell's
...k to surface. Then by using solar power cells electricity can be produced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 221.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72718952467 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565610859729 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7976144314 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12450112355 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462588563709 0.0996497079465 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327484368061 0.0662205650399 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813159297893 0.162205337803 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320832316499 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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