In animals and humans, genes determine the general size and shape of the organism, but there may also be variation in physical characteristics due to environmental influences. All organisms function most efficiently under certain environmental conditions; however, an individual organism may react to some change in the environment with responses that change the form or internal structure of the body.
An organism’s environment includes nonliving factors such as temperature, water, and nutrients. The environment also includes biological factors: all the other organisms that are part of any individual’s environment. Environmental stimuli can have important effects on individual organisms, groups, and whole populations.
The influence of environmental factors is particularly effective during the formative stages of life, both before and after birth. The experiences of early life determine the physical and mental attributes of the young and thereby determine the characteristics of the adult. Early influences can have favorable or unfavorable effects on the young organism’s development. Environmental factors exert such a strong influence on development that some physical or mental characteristics are difficult or impossible to change later in life.
Research on many types of animals and observations of human life have revealed that early environmental influences affect an individual’s initial rate of growth and resistance to various types of stress, as well as the ultimate body size of the adult. Environmental factors also affect learning ability and behavioral patterns in the young.
Both the article and the lecture revolve around the potential effects of exposure to several environmental stimuli on the development of individual organisms, groups, and populations. According to the reading passage, the author emphasizes that many environmental elements can incredibly affect the physical and intellectual attributes of young children and animals and have an immeasurably extended effect on their long life as well. In the conversation, the professor elaborates on the mentioned points of the reading passage by providing relevant examples.
First, the article claims that exposure to some individual stimuli can positively initiate the optimal growth of individuals and enhances their resistance to various kinds of stress. The lecturer sheds light on that point by giving daily handling and cold as compelling examples. In other words, hugging, kissing can dramatically promote the optimal growth of young children and boost their immunity. On the contrary, frequent exposure to cold can drastically influence the growth of some species of animals and left them vulnerable to many diseases.
Second, the article states that early exposure to some environmental elements, before and after birth, can significantly affect the physical characteristics of individuals. The professor elaborates on that by providing deers and rats as examples. In other words, environmental stimuli like scarcity of food could adversely have an extendable effect not only on the growth of young deers but also on their future generations. Also, eating habits that developed in early life can last forever. For example, rats exposed to a low protein diet in their early life will voluntarily opt to receive the same diet throughout their life, even in the presence of other protein-rich diets in adulthood.
Third, the article states that some environmental stimuli may affect the intellectual abilities of individuals. The lecturer elaborates on that by proving young children as an example. He states that early childhood malnutrition can adversely influence not only the physical form of young children but also their intellectual abilities. Accordingly, it many negatively affects their ability to grasp information and their academic progress as well.
As you can see, the lecturer effectively supports the main three points introduced in the reading passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as compelling examples. In other words, hugging, kissing can dramatically promot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, may, second, so, third, well, for example, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.4613686534 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1373.03311258 147% => OK
No of words: 357.0 270.72406181 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03439574427 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 419.366225166 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5203289143 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0822805784644 0.272083759551 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296076151501 0.0996497079465 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363596717368 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468067144376 0.162205337803 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345235671432 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.8541721854 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.2367328918 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 63.6247240618 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.7273730684 154% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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