are dinosaurs enthormers or not?
The main idea of lecture and passage was about debation of dinosaurs 's origin.
narrator gave three reasons to proof his idea.on other hand outhor by three reasons disagree with him and reject his supposition.in the following paragraph i explore their argument and reasons.
first reason was about dinasuars' s enviroment. Passage explain that dinasuars ' fossils have been discovered in polar rigions but proffesor reject this reason by contending that temperature of polar regions was higher than today and they could n't migrate or hibernate like another animals so they have to live there and the weather was nt bothering for them.
second reason which was debated between the two of them, was about leg position and movement. narrator believed that dinosaurs legs were positioned underneath its body and it avoid them from running and it look like them to endotherms. on the contrary professor thought that is not strong reason and dinosaurs were large animals and they did n't need running.however size of them didn't allow them runnig.
at last reason passage reveal a correlation between bone structure and enothermy.
narrator try to contend that specific structure called haversian canals was found in dinosaurs 's fossile, cause living animal to grow quickly and it is a characteristic of endothemy.also it sould be noted that, listenning rejected this idea. she elaborated her belief by contending that they grew at small rate and after a while its stopped. so it will be exceedingly hard to say dinosaurs was endotherms
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Narrator
... about debation of dinosaurs s origin. narrator gave three reasons to proof his idea.on...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... supposition.in the following paragraph i explore their argument and reasons. fi...
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Suggestion: First
... i explore their argument and reasons. first reason was about dinasuars s enviroment...
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...s about dinasuars s enviroment. Passage explain that dinasuars fossils have been disco...
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...viroment. Passage explain that dinasuars fossils have been discovered in polar ri...
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... polar regions was higher than today and they could nt migrate or hibernate like ...
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...the weather was nt bothering for them. second reason which was debated between the t...
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...as nt bothering for them. second reason which was debated between the two of the...
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...m, was about leg position and movement. narrator believed that dinosaurs legs were posit...
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Message: Did you mean 'avoids'?
Suggestion: avoids
...e positioned underneath its body and it avoid them from running and it look like them...
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Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
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...y and it avoid them from running and it look like them to endotherms. on the contrar...
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...id nt need running.however size of them didnt allow them runnig. at last reason pass...
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... between bone structure and enothermy. narrator try to contend that specific structure ...
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...ed that, listenning rejected this idea. she elaborated her belief by contending tha...
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Suggestion: So
...all rate and after a while its stopped. so it will be exceedingly hard to say dino...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 248.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1814516129 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76543241017 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1757121119 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.818181818 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100201788981 0.272083759551 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494858626772 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572138272374 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570546094596 0.162205337803 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588867297797 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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