The lecture refutes the reading that claims the painting, Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet, is not drawn by Rembrandt, a famous Dutch painter, by clarifying the three arguments the reading presents.
First, the lecture elucidates the inconsistency about the way the woman in the portrait is dressed. By assuming that she is a servant from her linen cap in the portrait, the reading questions why the woman is also wearing a luxurious fur collar that a servant cannot afford. On the other hand, the lecture clarifies that the fur collar is not part of Rembrandt’s original painting. The recent research using x-rays reveals that someone added the fur collar about 100 years later to increase the value of the painting.
Second, the lecture maintains that the portrait illustrates the realistic color of the light reflection under the additional fur collar painting. The reading suspects the incoherent description of the light and shadow. The reading identifies that the below the face should not be illuminated as much as other parts of the face because the fur collar would have absorbed the light. However, the lecture indicates that light and shadow are realistic and coherent in the original painting without the additional fur collar.
Third, the lecture specifies the reason why the portrait was painted on several wooden panels. Considering this use of panels as an exception for Rembrandt’s works, the reading doubts that the origin of painting is Rembrandt. In contrast, the lecture explains the panels were glued together with the original paintings when the fur collar was added. With the aid of additional panels, the portrait raises its value. Moreover, the lecture adds her credibility by stating that the wooden panels of the portrait are from the same tree as the wooden panels of another Rembrandt’s work, Self-Portrait with a Hat.
In conclusion, the lecture refutes the reading’s argument that Rembrandt did not paint Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet by expounding on three counter-arguments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20180722892 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79082804014 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478915662651 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.23620309051 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.710856567 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111047191847 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479250803723 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597512859743 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654235269804 0.162205337803 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463320586667 0.0443174109184 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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