The reading and listening are both contradicting each other, in terms of cultivating broccoli on the East coast. The author of the article states that growing broccoli on the east side would be cost-effective and beneficial to the consumers, however, the lecturer casts doubt about the claim mentioned in the article and refutes all the theories explained in the article.
According to the article, the first dispute focuses on the idea of raising the broccoli on the east coast would help to terminate further transportation of broccoli from the west region, and as a result of that, it will mitigate the cost of buying it. Nonetheless, the speaker negates the argument presented in the passage. Furthermore, she states less broccoli may survive in the harsh summer of the east coast compared to the west side. Hence, the customers will not get it at a cheaper rate.
Moreover, another topic of the debate is connected with that the broccoli is being raised by a traditional breeding technique which is a quite trustworthy and safe technique for consumers. However, the narrator refutes this theory by asserting most people think that genetically modified crops are not safe to consume. Therefore, consumers do not trust and may reject the new breeding technique as it is financially supported by genetic modification technology.
Last but not least, the text explains buyers will get the opportunity to buy fresh broccoli from the local market due to harvesting and cultivating it in the same region. In this regard, they will get minerals and vitamins from that fresh harvesting broccoli. On the contrary, the speaker again opposes the theory and describes that people can obtain the same nutrient and vitamins from other green leafy vegetables such as kale. Thus, people should focus on vegetables and fruits which are already available in the local market instead of investing a huge amount of money as well as energy in the new breeding technique of broccoli which may not have a 100% survival chance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06325301205 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73888276616 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539156626506 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2299528251 49.2860985944 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06452816374 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165236195831 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549681846153 0.0996497079465 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036226434092 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09603982494 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160525653369 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.7273730684 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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