The reading material indicates that the new and strict regulation are not needed for handling and storing coal ash in order to protect our environment. However, the listening passage said we definitely should establish a new one.
Firstly, although the strict regulation have already existed, besides, companies must use liner in new pond or landfill to make sure prevent leaking into the soil to the surroundings. On the contrary, the professor says that the regulation only influence the new land rather than the od land or landfill which can cause big environment damage. So it is necessary to build a new rules.
Secondly, many companies concern that the strict rules may discourage the recycling of coal ash into their other items which is dangerous, because their consumers are too scared to buy the products. The reason why this is an impossible situation is that mercury can storage in the products for a long time and be recycled safely and it is not mean that the consumers stop using it anymore.
Thirdly, for the increasing cost, the companies have a negative attitude. That means they have to spend ten times the current expense. What's more, they would become unwelcomed by rising the electricity price. According to this, the listening material argus that if we know the extra money---15 billion which seems too costly is just one precent of the sales, we would think it is not a big deal for companies.
- Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmful chemicals may be doing to the 3
- TOEFL T P O 46 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmful chemicals may be doing to the 3
- Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmful chemicals may be doing to the 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'rule'?
Suggestion: rule
...mage. So it is necessary to build a new rules. Secondly, many companies concern th...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...to spend ten times the current expense. Whats more, they would become unwelcomed by r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95416666667 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61437997217 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620833333333 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8942594415 49.2860985944 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.090909091 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0674165902875 0.272083759551 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219163240408 0.0996497079465 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353714531838 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432170760217 0.162205337803 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388257162684 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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