The reading passage states that dinosaurs were endotherms. the lecturer, however, counters this and states that dinosaurs were not the endotherms.
first of all, the author claims that dinosaurs fossils were discovered in the polar region. only the endotherms animal would maintain the temperature as surrounding in the polar region. this argument is challenged by the lecturer.she says that the polar region was warmer than today and maybe dinosaurs have migrated to another place during cold or maybe they hibernated.
secondly, the author states that endotherms have legs underneath the body, as the dinosaurs have which helps them while running. this argument is rebutted in the lecture. The lecturer states that the presence of leg help dinosaurs to grow larger in size.
finally, the author mentions that a structure called Haversian canal is included in endotherms which allow animals to grow quickly and rapidly as dinosaurs do. the lecturer cast doubt on this by arguing that apart from the canal dinosaurs also has growth rings which serve as a evidence that they grow slowly in cold periods and rapidly in the warm periods. this fluctuation in growth is the characteristic of non-endothermic animals.
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- dinosaurs endotherm 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... states that dinosaurs were endotherms. the lecturer, however, counters this and st...
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...hat dinosaurs were not the endotherms. first of all, the author claims that dinosaur...
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...ls were discovered in the polar region. only the endotherms animal would maintain th...
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...ure as surrounding in the polar region. this argument is challenged by the lecturer....
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Suggestion: Secondly
... during cold or maybe they hibernated. secondly, the author states that endotherms have...
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...rs have which helps them while running. this argument is rebutted in the lecture. Th...
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Suggestion: larger
... presence of leg help dinosaurs to grow larger in size. finally, the author mentions that a s...
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...help dinosaurs to grow larger in size. finally, the author mentions that a structure c...
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...rs also has growth rings which serve as a evidence that they grow slowly in cold ...
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...eriods and rapidly in the warm periods. this fluctuation in growth is the characteri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 193.0 270.72406181 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30569948187 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71774376484 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544041450777 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0221741023 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0909090909 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374781290634 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143444733132 0.0996497079465 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689190164922 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225499148348 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328321597736 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.