Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Learning new language is a must for chidren nowdays.these days students should learn at least one extra language that can communicate with people in the world.some people say that chidren should learn new language when they learn their mother tongue very well while other disagree.in my view students should begin learning new language as soon as they enter the school for two important reasons.
First is that learning new language early will help them in the future.when a student beagins to learn new language at the age of 7,by the age of 17 he/she would be the master of that language.so he/she can communicate well with everyone in the world with that language.it is very good for success of that person.forexample I started learning english when I was 8 years old,I went to classes out of school nonstop,every day spring to winter,so at the age of 17 I finished the classes.i was in a position that I could get my diploma at english.one day I and my family went travel to a foreign country.on the very first day of our travel my brother became very ill so we should brought him to a hospital.i understanded english so I spoke with doctors and said exactly what was wrong with my brother.with that explanation doctors could cure him very well.with that experience I learned that learning a new language is something that everyone should learn at young age.
Second is that they can use it with each other.if students learn foreigh language and their mother tongur with each other when entering school they can be more successful,they can compare those two language with eachother in every aspect and they can learn both of them very fast.forexamole my cousin is 8years old.he went to school lat yea,in their school they learn english with persian together,he learnt writing very fast.now insoite of his age he can distiguish every english or persaim word from each other.he can now compare each of the language structures,their differnces and their similarities.one day he was watching tv her mother came and said not to watch tv too often.he said to his mother that I read in an english book that every person can watch tv about two hours a day.i was so shoched so his mother.this is advantages of learning new language at school.even he can understand english films somhow.so in my view it can help you in the future.
In sum though learning new language has its own difficulties every one should learn at least one.not only it will help them in the future but also it help students to learn their mother tongue writing very fast.specialy nowdays because of advancement of technology we should do our best to learn a foreign language spaecially english that is a internatinal language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, while, at least, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 5.04856512141 475% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 22.412803532 361% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 30.3222958057 191% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 1373.03311258 163% => OK
No of words: 462.0 270.72406181 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84632034632 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82490420529 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 145.348785872 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445887445887 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 419.366225166 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 115.0 21.2450331126 541% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 291.433847554 49.2860985944 591% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 559.75 110.228320801 508% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 115.5 21.698381199 532% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 7.06452816374 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22152161889 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160647675041 0.0996497079465 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361984045124 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160647675041 0.162205337803 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361984045124 0.0443174109184 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 59.2 13.3589403974 443% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -28.33 53.8541721854 -53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 5.55761589404 263% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.8 11.0289183223 415% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.9 8.42419426049 141% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.7273730684 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 48.0 10.498013245 457% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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