Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
Modern technology affects society in many different ways. Some people agree that access to the internet has positive effects to develop their daily lives while others argues about it. In my opinion, the internet gives enormous benefits to both individuals and communities as a whole. I felt this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, rapid advance in technology helps humankind to be able to collect accumulation of knowledge in respective fields. In early ages, people might have lost in their perspectives of a topic, but today, they can check their ideas with others' on the internet. Moreover, varieties of articles and websites are available nowadays, which means students do not have to go the libraries and borrow necessary books for their studies, by clicking search button on Google or other similar platforms will lead to the collection of information information with respect to their needs. For instance, during my final year thesis, my professor suggested me to restart a new title and time was very precious at the moment, bothering me a lot. The development in technology was the solution for me; searching information, learning through online, etc. this instance demonstrates that having internet in our daily lives leads to a better vision for future and career.
Secondly, upgraded version of social applications engages people in various locations. When you are studying abroad alone, you can easily have online calls or video chats with your family at anytime and anywhere. this makes us comfortable and feeling relaxed to see whom we miss and like to talk to unlike the previous decades. On the other hand, internet frauds are wandering around online, causing online bullying and internet addiction problems, which are due to wrong usage of internet. Hence, if internet internet can be used properly, how useful and supportive of online sources is beautifully found.
To wrap up, however, the negativities of the internet is occurring outside the positivities, the advantages of widespread use of internet on our lives always overweigh the disadvantages around the globe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: information
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...th your family at anytime and anywhere. this makes us comfortable and feeling relaxe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: internet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 345.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24637681159 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7849567388 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 145.348785872 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646376811594 0.540411800872 120% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 419.366225166 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8476239059 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189762313909 0.272083759551 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528453324987 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485358927498 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112853220699 0.162205337803 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255536265252 0.0443174109184 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.42419426049 117% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 63.6247240618 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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