Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should buy things that are made in their own country, even if the price of these products is higher than that of the products made in other countries.
The 20th and 21st centuries are the most progressive centuries which we are living in them and so disputable has the consumption of domesticated products been that all of the countries especially, less developed countries attempt to control the volume of their import. The fact that we should purchase products, which made in own country compared to those are made abroad, has turned to a crucial crisis, and it is momentous that we be in favor of domesticated products. Destructive though this policy, I believe that, and I will delve into a couple of conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my viewpoint.
First and foremost, the more we advocate indigenous companies, the more we face to economic growth. We should support these companies to compete together. Furthermore, some products are going to expand, qualitatively. By buying the products made in overseas not only are the country economically faced to economic stagnation, but people also face an inevitable inflation by which people will be plagued. As an example, in my country had some of the products never produced by recent years, and so solicited were people's demands that we turned to importing country. Both of increasing in the rate of inflation and decreasing in the capability of companies were persuasive but devastating reasons for being continuously a consumer country.
Besides, turning to a producer will provide the companies capable of the expansion of workforces. Alternatively, it will create a decline in the rate of unemployment whereby people have been always irritated. In the previous example, were the country propelled to generate the desired products, we would reduce the imported commodities. In order to expand the volume of productions, we would hire a plethora of fresh workforces who had been adequately taught to be expert and responsible and intensely passionate about their careers. In the majority of countries, so capable is the government that students are able to educate based on their enthusiasm. Neither of their parents nor the government compels them to opt a money-making job or those by which they can have a permanent job quickly.
In conclusion, I admit that people, especially in the third world countries, should support domesticated commodities even they are severely forced by paying higher costs. Arduous though is this manner, the companies will be autonomous, and rescue the country from problems are said because, where there is a will there is a way. Rarely had own country been conservative about this problem when the rate of inflation and unemployment was increased, and a word spoken is an arrow left fly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tion of domesticated products been that all of the countries especially, less developed co...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...agued. As an example, in my country had some of the products never produced by recent years...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
...the rate of unemployment whereby people have been always irritated. In the previous example, wer...
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Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tensely passionate about their careers. In the majority of countries, so capable i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, so, third, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 10.4613686534 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 30.3222958057 188% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1373.03311258 161% => OK
No of words: 425.0 270.72406181 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00214087394 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 145.348785872 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522352941176 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 419.366225166 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7737963428 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.777777778 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6111111111 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155867448954 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470312401264 0.0996497079465 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045118144322 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918152748828 0.162205337803 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411633558964 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 63.6247240618 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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