Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Among all the characters that a successful person has,
communication skill is the most important.
Throughout the histoy, human being has always tried to be successful, for it brings a lot of adavntages. Scholars have always tried to find the crucial factors which participate in being successful and increase the chance of being a role model for others. One of controversial questions is that whether communication skill is the most important skill which contributes to being a successful person. Although some people might agree with this statement, I contend that communication is not the most important factor in being successful. In the following paragraphs I will delve into the most significant reasons supporting my viewpoint.
The first reason to be mentioned is that several skills are required for a person to be able to succeed and stand out among peers and one of them is being able to communicate effectively. Nowadays competition in every field is fierce and people are thriving to succeed in their jobs so numerous skills are required to stand out including talent, persistence, honesty, expertise and so on. Because of the severe competition the more you have of these characters, the more you will be successful. If a person does not have one of these characteristics the chance of reaching success will decrease.
The second reason is that there are a lot of people with high communication skills but they are not successful which is an evidence that this skill is not the most important requirement for success. Moreover, a lot of successful people lack good communication skills. For example, Larry Page founder of Google is an introverted person and he confessed in one of his interviews that he does not benefit of an impressive interpersonal skills. He also added that in fields which your product’s quality is of more importance people who are introverted can be more successful since they concentrate their energy on their work rather than communicating with others.
So to sum it up, there are a lot of factors important in being successful such as persistence, honesty, expertise and so forth and without every one of them the chance of being successful will diminish considerably. Also, there have been a lot of role models in the history who have not benefited from good interpersonal skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ys tried to be successful, for it brings a lot of adavntages. Scholars have alway...
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Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cters, the more you will be successful. If a person does not have one of these cha...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
... benefit of an impressive interpersonal skills. He also added that in fields which you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 10.4613686534 306% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1373.03311258 136% => OK
No of words: 368.0 270.72406181 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07065217391 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04545258167 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461956521739 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3946082259 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 21.698381199 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06452816374 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168087960832 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680111887912 0.0996497079465 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566856239511 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103946964186 0.162205337803 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434036071304 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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