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Do you believe in luck, hard working or talent?

Honorable attendantce. Dear teachers, beloved brothers, and sisters.Life always extends to cover different fields, as well as human interests and believes. People's believes usually vary from person to person; there are those who believe in luck, hard working and talent, but personally speaking I believe in hard-working.
Hard-working is one of the most necessary things on which you should focus. No one reaches his or her goals without making any effort because life is about giving and taking. Consequently, when you give something, you will have something in return. Those who believe in luck built their believe on accidental things happened for them, also there those who think that possessing some tools brings good luck like having rabbit leg or some kind of rings. However, I strongly believe that there is no such thing called "luck" ,but I'm totally convinced by the fact of the existence of a common thing between luck and hard-working which states that luck believers always do their best to gain whatever they set out to gain, especially, if that is going to bring them good luck. Therefore, we conclude that luck is basically connected to hard-working. Talented people; on the other hand, are those people who have special skills. Talent is the skill or the ability of doing something well, order to sharpen this talent people have to work hard. Morover, talent can be gained by hard-working as well.
Hard-working is the number one choice for successful people who aim to make their goals, dreams and whatever they want, to come into reality. There are a lot of people who have talents. A Smart person realize the potential of his talents, but the smartest one realize the potential of combining his talents with hard-working.To sum up, it is good to know your talents, but it's better to know how to improve them. Hard working is the best way to upgrade talents and skills.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Life
...teachers, beloved brothers, and sisters.Life always extends to cover different field...
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Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
.... Those who believe in luck built their believe on accidental things happened for them,...
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Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is no such thing called 'luck' ,but Im totally convinced by the fact of ...
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Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...such thing called 'luck' ,but Im totally convinced by the fact of the ex...
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Line 2, column 1001, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sharpening'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: sharpening
... ability of doing something well, order to sharpen this talent people have to work hard. M...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...combining his talents with hard-working.To sum up, it is good to know your talents...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 318.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68918491696 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600628930818 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7326146157 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498678336422 0.272083759551 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149755304625 0.0996497079465 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123362986623 0.0662205650399 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316390702815 0.162205337803 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133284743435 0.0443174109184 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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