The passage posits that in an effort to encourage ecologically sustainable forestry practices, an international organization started issuing certifications to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recycling materials. Companies that obtain this certification can lure customers by advertising their products. Many companies around the world have adopted to new practices in order to achieve this certification. However, there are few reasons that that wood companies in the United States will do the same.
Firstly, the passage states that these days there are enumerate advertising going on which do not interest the Americans anymore and so many products are labeled as new or improved to which they would not pay attention. In contrast, the author states that Americans would give importance to the certification and are able to recognize the difference between individual and international certified recognition.
In addition, to get these certifications it would require a lot more money and in turn these money would be accommodated to the original price of the product which would appear to be costly to the customer while the uncertified same product can be purchased at a lower price. While on the contrast the audio states that the customers would be mindful if there is a lot of price difference. The price after certification would be 5% higher and they would not hesitate to get a good certified product at a minimal difference in cost.
Furthermore, many argue that although it always makes good business sense for American companies to keep up with the developments it is not convincing and pursuing this certification would make sense only if they are exported abroad. Instead most of the items are consumed within the country where people are very much satisfied even without the certification whereas the author states that these days there is a lot of international trade
happening and if people inside the country doesn't purchase these quality products then the domestic companies outside would acquire and make use of them in international trade.
- Milk and dairy products are rich in vitamin D and calcium substances essential for building and maintaining bones Many people therefore say that a diet rich in dairy products can help prevent osteoporosis a disease that is linked to both environmental and 57
- In an effort to improve our employees productivity we should implement electronic monitoring of employees Internet use from their workstations Employees who use the Internet from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we are to reduce th 54
- The following appeared in a letter to the school board in the town of Centerville All students should be required to take the driver s education course at Centerville High School In the past two years several accidents in and around Centerville have invol 50
- Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve 50
- The solution to most problems that societies confront is a higher level of political sophistication that results from more education When people have the facts about the issues they will be clearer thinkers and better citizens Most people depend on broadc 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enumerated'.
Suggestion: enumerated
...assage states that these days there are enumerate advertising going on which do not inter...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...ld require a lot more money and in turn these money would be accommodated to the original p...
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Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...sense only if they are exported abroad. Instead most of the items are consumed within t...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...pening and if people inside the country doesnt purchase these quality products then th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1373.03311258 130% => OK
No of words: 334.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32934131737 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0321877536 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523952095808 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 419.366225166 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.062147491 49.2860985944 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.818181818 110.228320801 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3636363636 21.698381199 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263465491027 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112603418965 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15793501747 0.0662205650399 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150475207027 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176476990736 0.0443174109184 398% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.3589403974 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.8541721854 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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