Environmental science - using Reusable bags instead of plastic bags
Passage and lecture both give positive points in using Reusable bages instead of plastic ones.
From writer's point of view the most obvious benefit of reusable bag over plastic is envireomental waste reduction. The lecture supports this idea and sheds light on issue of huge resource waste and its effects on lands and animals.
Besides, the writer discuses the financial aspects and the lecturer agrees with it and explains monetry considerations. For example how much money can be saved by replacing reusable bags in place of plastic bags. If each persons uses 2 or 3 bags per day costing only one cent, after a year there will be a significant amount of money waste.
Finally the writer sees relation of plastic bag consumption and petroleum. The lecturer talks about use of millions of galons of petroleum in production of billions of plastic bags. By replacing such bags a considerable amount of resources might be saved and this will decreases consumers expensed costs.
Sentence: If each persons uses 2 or 3 bags per day costing only one cent, after a year there will be a significant amount of money waste.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and persons
The lecturer talks about use of millions of galons of petroleum
The lecturer talks about the use of millions of galons of petroleum
and this will decreases consumers expensed costs.
and this will decrease consumers costs.
Sentence: Passage and lecture both give positive points in using Reusable bages instead of plastic ones.
Error: bages Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: From writer's point of view the most obvious benefit of reusable bag over plastic is envireomental waste reduction.
Error: envireomental Suggestion: environmental
Sentence: Besides, the writer discuses the financial aspects and the lecturer agrees with it and explains monetry considerations.
Error: monetry Suggestion: monetary
Sentence: The lecturer talks about use of millions of galons of petroleum in production of billions of plastic bags.
Error: galons Suggestion: gallons
Sentence: By replacing such bags a considerable amount of resources might be saved and this will decreases consumers expensed costs.
Error: expensed Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 162 250
No. of Characters: 801 1200
No. of Different Words: 109 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.568 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.944 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.613 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.859 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.401 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.667 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.058 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4