The Sydney Opera House is quite distinctive when it comes to it design itself. Myriads of designs were submitted by firms worldwide, but the selected one was of John Utzon, a Danish architect who was not a eminent figure outside of Denmark. The design of Opera House was more of a sculpture rather than a building as it changes shape depending on the direction of the view. The design was also matched with the environment which showed the opera house with a curved roofs like a sailing ship in the ocean.
The roof was the most attractive and unconventional part of the design. Engineers had most difficulty in stabilizing the shells that was 200 feet high. As technology was not advanced enough, due to the incompletion of the structure, John had to redesign the opera house and it was eventually completed in 1973.
The lecturer consider it as the state of the art, modern and unique. It was unique in a sense that it was not just an international school but it was structured using the advancement of structure engineering and the new material for creating the roof. The Sydney Opera House design is imaginative and it breaks out of the sky scraper, which makes it unique. Lectures disagrees with the organic design, as it is design was more penchant to please the eye rather than merging with the surrounding.
The Opera House is a a blend of an art as well as the architecture. It is widely recognized all over the world and it is one of a kind. The design is not a copy of some other design, neither is the design used for some other house. It makes the building unique.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59507042254 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65531948794 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.354797708 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06452816374 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198827888106 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881699119456 0.0996497079465 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119412827292 0.0662205650399 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131509319125 0.162205337803 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624051939848 0.0443174109184 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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