Ethanol fuel VS Gasoline fuel
The article states that ethanol fuel made from some plants to be alternative to gasoline in the United States and provides three resaons of support. However, the professor explains that actually ethanol is good alternative to gasoline and three reason is not convincing and refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading claims that ethanol cause global warming for giving carbon dioxide into athmosphere. The professor refutes this point by saying that it is true the ethanol release carbon dioxide into athmosphere but the plants which use to make ethanol remove carbon dioxide from athmosphere and so That does not directly release into athmosphere.
Second the article posits that amount of the corn which is use of animal feeding is reduced for making ethanol. The professor says that during making of ethanol only one part of whole corn is used. According to the professor this part whose name is selulose is not eaten by animals and so this case do not affect the corn amount which is used for feeding animal.
Third, the reading says that the ethanol price is not comparable with gasoline and both of them look like equal but this case is possible with government subsidies. The professor opposes this point by explaning that supporting by government to the ethanol producers is true but this situation is not restrict with it. He also states that increasingly producing do not allow the increase of price of ethanol. With this increase of producing the price of ethanol reduce one of three.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e into athmosphere but the plants which use to make ethanol remove carbon dioxide f...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'restricted'.
Suggestion: restricted
...ucers is true but this situation is not restrict with it. He also states that increasing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, look, second, so, third, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 253.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03557312253 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50288464862 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462450592885 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1651772292 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.818181818 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19546484661 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775367819299 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574863598015 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116612641394 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758466103871 0.0443174109184 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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