Family is considered as one of the crucial parts of anyone’s life. People first receive their basic habits, attitudes as well as learn about this mysterious world from their family members. Earlier, it was a very common practice to live with a joint family where parents, siblings, grandparents, uncle, aunt lived together. But in recent, people are started to live in a nuclear family. Personally, I believe that an extended family doesn’t bear so much importance like earlier days. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, In this competitive world, everything is getting so tough as well as competition has increased. People are started to become more sincere regarding the education of their children. They know it is quite impossible to lead a prestigious and healthy life without proper education. In a joint family, there are usually a lot of family members. As a result, there always prevail in a crowdy environment. Therefore, children can’t concentrate on their studies. My own experience is a compelling example of this. In my childhood, I used to live in a family of 12 members. Our house was also full of din and bustle. When I started to sit for my study, my cousins made noise themselves. Besides, adult members also contributed by talking loudly with themselves. However, I couldn’t focus on my studies and as a result, I did terrible on my exam. Thereafter, my parents understood the situation and decided to shift on a nuclear family and I was able to successfully overcome my hurdles and performed well in my exams.
Moreover, Nowadays, people have a tendency to leave their native home and started to live in a town for the pursuit of getting more facilities. That’s why many Indian people shift to America everywhere for a better life and secured life. My own country, Bangladesh is a good example of this situation. Dhaka is the Capital city of Bangladesh and it has some enormous facilities like job, income, modern lifestyle, shopping e.t.c in comparison to other local cities. That’s why every year people are coming to Dhaka from all around the country leaving their relatives there. I have also come to Dhaka, after completing my undergraduate from a university located in a small town. Now, from 2 years I am accommodating here with my fellow housemates. Here daily expenses are comparatively higher than small cities in Bangladesh as a result people tend to live in a small family. Because it’s very strenuous to bear such an extended family expenditure. Besides, modern apartments are designed in such a way that it can support up to 5-6 people.
In conclusion, it is extremely beneficial to live in a nuclear family as it provides the opportunities of living in a calm, quiet environment. Moreover, the expense to live in a place where one can find all the modern facilities is too high to live in a large family.
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- TOEFL TPO 16 - Integrated Writing Task 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 30.3222958057 241% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2449.0 1373.03311258 178% => OK
No of words: 495.0 270.72406181 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94747474747 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.04702891845 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94749897872 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 145.348785872 182% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 419.366225166 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 13.0662251656 237% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5211427837 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9677419355 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58064516129 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.27373068433 398% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125258882561 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307517234931 0.0996497079465 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442319332019 0.0662205650399 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758427036722 0.162205337803 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453114495709 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 63.6247240618 200% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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