Famous writer Chevalier de seingault
The Chevalier memoir was filled with many adventures and had historical value in the eighteenth century. However, the controversies in the memoir of the Chevalier were raised by some critics and those can be explored with the reliability in the following essay.
First of all, Chevalier while living in Switzerland, he was wealthy and spent a great amount of money on parties and gambling. Here critics have a doubt that if the Chevalier is wealthy, why he borrowed a huge amount of money from the swiss merchant. However, the women in the lecture say that in order to spend a large amount of money he doesn't have cash so he had to sell a property that takes time to get sold. so, this is why Chevalier borrowed money from the swiss merchant.
Secondly, the critics also mentioned about the conversations between the Chevalier and the famous writer Voltaire. They think that Chevalier's memoir didn't capture the exact conversations between Chevalier and Voltaire, because it was written many years after the conversations occured. The woman in the lecture says that after each conversation the chevalier made notes about their conversations and he regularly consulted those notes and journals while writing the memoir.
Finally, the critics even have a doubt about the chevalier esacape from the prison of venice. Since, the Chevalier escaped from the venetian prison using a piece of metal to make a hole in the ceiling and climbed through the roof and escaped. Many of them think that though his reading is enjoyable, they think that chevalier's jailers were bribed to free him and also they mention that he had a great political influence from venice to get him out. However, the woman from the lecture states that more than the chevalier, many people in the prison had great influence from political side. Still they couldnot get out of the prison. Later, while talking to the jailers they said that the ceiling of the room was old and they had to repair. So, he could have got that metal from there.
In conclusion, the chevalier's memoir was much reliable and also it depicts the true events which took place in Chevaliers life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1373.03311258 130% => OK
No of words: 363.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90633608815 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52650574129 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471074380165 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9303189841 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.764705882 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161798578687 0.272083759551 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618154490505 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623571040795 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100485435826 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439116347179 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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