In the lecture, the professor makes a series of points that cast doubt on all the arguments presented in the passage about the benefit of franchises. She sates, closely following and watching franchises showed different results and called their benefit into question.
First of all, the author claims that franchises provide reliable supplier and save money. However, the profesor states that they force franchise owners to buy specific goods and services which is not cheap and even are very expensive. Hence, it will cost for business owner a lot.In other words, franchise owner are not allowed to buy the cheaper and better quality product.
Also, the professor refutes the idea that was presentd in the passage about no need to advertise in franchise business. She states, actually they have to pay 60 percent of their sale money for advertisement to the company which they do not own. The advertisement advertises the company's product not their own product and they make little benefit out of it. This amount could be half if they advertise for their own business and they have freedom.
Lastly, the lecturer says the security of franchises are better than first time businesses but the security of business could be increased by third option which is less risky and was not pointed in the passage. In fact, if a person buy an independent business from previous owner, they would have twice chance of success and the failure rate would be less.
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...ess and the failure rate would be better .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, so, third, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 226.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95575221239 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49497933632 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4705631759 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199812673848 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786809625764 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835437102929 0.0662205650399 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128021342097 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096674945202 0.0443174109184 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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