The table illustrates the number of factories in England and Wales and their total employees and their gender in 5 consecutive decade from 1851 to1901.
Overall, total number of emplyees during the 5 decades decreased significantly with highest number in 1851 and lowest in 1901. Male were the dominant number of employees in every decade compare to female employees except in 1861 which women were the highest one. Total number of factories were the lowest in the beginning of this 5 decade period and increased over the time.
In start of the period, 225 factories were available in england and wales and the number increased dramaticly after 2 decades and reached to 622 unit. The number of factories growed and peaked at 1881 with 721 total in england and wales. Then, the number of factories decreased slowly in the following decades and reached to the 600 unit at 1901.
Although the number of factories grewed from the baseline of 225, the total number of employees decreased dramaticly over the period of the half a centary. In 1851, the 225 factories provided employment for 477100 people whereas in 1901, 600 factories only accomodated 61000 employees. In 1861 more than half of employees were female which was unique in the whole period as male outnumbered female at every decade in terms of employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'decade' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'decades'.
Suggestion: decades
...oyees and their gender in 5 consecutive decade from 1851 to1901. Overall, total num...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...g the 5 decades decreased significantly with highest number in 1851 and lowest in 1901. Male...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99095022624 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54472493351 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438914027149 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7476435505 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.3 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377811416992 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171181299232 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093175377528 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269994212005 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812261597757 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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