The professor casts doubt on "Globalization" which is considered as a reason to grow economic and cultural interconnection between countries. According to the reading passage, the author states Globalization brings many benefits to our life however the professor disagrees with this opinion. The following reasons are holding his opinion.
First, the speaker tells that reliance cause trouble. For example, there has been a great recession in the US in 2008 which made US economics was declined at that time. Also, this depression emphasized EU countires so that depending to the high economics growth country is not a good idea.
Second, if it is cheaper to produce items outside of home country, there is few risks to get damaged to local employee. For instance, TV sold in the US was made in the USA before but today many TV company have firms in Mexico due to its affordable place to keep their costs cheaper and cheaper. In contrast, empolyee in the US were fired so hard to have same quality of life for them as same as they used to have.
Lastly, the professor suspects the theory that globalization has good effect on our environment. If the company do export and import business, they make pollution and its obviously harmfull to us. In the reading material, the author focuses the country have less business because of the pollution. However, the professor thinks the fact is opposite. The country relied to export company to support their economics is the worser than the one does not have less company.
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- TOEFL Official Guide - Practice Test 2 - Integrated Writing - Professors on TV 3
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives. 70
- American literature of the early 20th century saw the rise of a number of influential authors writing in a new style Ernest Hemingway F Scott Fitzgerald E E Cummings and Ezra Pound among many others left an undeniably deep impact on how we write 48
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are few risks'?
Suggestion: there are few risks
... produce items outside of home country, there is few risks to get damaged to local employee. For i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, for example, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9921875 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91228162741 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6380531521 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103299722821 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324686305426 0.0996497079465 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723084123719 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627917622187 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568720730399 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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