A government should focus its budget more on young children’s education than on universities.
Should the government put the budget more on young children's education rather than on universities? The answer is yes. I have to concede that university development relies mainly on government financial support. However, early education eagerly needs extra financial aids to guarantee the quality of teaching and facilities.
Firstly, children in five to eighteen are in a crucial stage of intelligence development thus deserve more attention and better educators. According to the latest report from China Children's health fund, children's brains mainly develop in their 5 to 18 years old. Besides, the costs are usually very high to train and educate competitive elementary and secondary teachers. In return, the salary of the teacher is pretty high. As the number of qualified teachers increases, K-18 education becomes unaffordable for parents. Therefore, the government should spend more money on early education to relieve this problem.
Secondly, good facilities are another important component of education. Although universities may argue that postsecondary education also requires support, however, there is much excellent research were done without government financial support. For example, the latest quick charge battery and artificial chemical lighting were invented without the government's help. Meanwhile, these great inventions will never realize without the help of early stimulation in one's creative and analytical character.
Admittedly, college education needs money. Usually, the salary of professors and the price of equipment are very high. However, colleges should depend on the donation of social organizations, large companies, and outstanding alumni. These groups can relieve much of the financial pressure. What's more, consider that university education is usually for elite and often an optional career. Thus, college should not impose more pressure on the general public and should instead charge more tuition fees from students who enroll in the program.
In conclusion, although a college needs funds to rebuild the campus, renew the laboratories, and refill the libraries, social organizations, companies, and individuals should raise money for them. The government, facing the situation of a limited budget with unlimited selection, should pay more attention to early education to guarantee a bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 5.01324503311 499% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1373.03311258 147% => OK
No of words: 344.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87790697674 5.08290768461 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8869996716 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 145.348785872 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 419.366225166 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.503888981 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9090909091 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293061785783 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797702098204 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113978311164 0.0662205650399 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165278653891 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803395547044 0.0443174109184 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.8541721854 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.2367328918 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 63.6247240618 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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