how elephants' behavior is amazing in humans' eyes
Both the reading and the lecture talk about how elephants' behavior is amazing in humans' eyes. The author of the excerpt provides three specific and unbelievable behaviors of elephants that are the reason for our interested in elephants. Nonetheless, the professor in the lecture denies the author's opinion. She claims that such a considering comes from some misunderstanding of humans toward elephants' behaviors. Following that the professor rejects these three behaviors of elephants as meaningful ones.
First and foremost, according to the author of the article, elephants are aware of their death time, in fact, they know they will be died soon, because of that they go away from their group and live near the water until their death. However, the professor rejects this thought by referring to weak teeth of older elephants which make them look for softer vegetation to feed on. In the professor's viewpoint, the aforementioned weakness is the roots of their living away of their group, especially noticing to the fact that vegetation near water is softer than otherwise. Considering this, it is not surprising to find elephants' bone exclusively in a place. One another point said by the professor is that some older elephants live among their group.
The professor further asserts that elephants are very sensitive inasmuch as they can be learned to follow a specific pattern, for instance, they can be trained to paint a picture by their trunks. It is important to notice that such an ability do not mean that elephants know flower or other pictures painted by themselves. Such an explanation proposed by the professor refutes the idea of the author of the reading that elephants are art presenting.
The author of the article lasting insists that elephant afraid of mice because they live places where occupied by a few mice. Nevertheless, the professor reputes this by stating that such behavior is not because of their aware. In fact, they get away from animals that they are not familiar with. For instance, elephants in zoos see mice many times and are familiar with such an animal, so they are not at all in the scare of mice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...the professor in the lecture denies the authors opinion. She claims that such a conside...
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Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professors'' or 'professor's'?
Suggestion: professors'; professor's
...or softer vegetation to feed on. In the professors viewpoint, the aforementioned weakness ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1373.03311258 130% => OK
No of words: 357.0 270.72406181 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0056022409 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68197592178 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504201680672 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 419.366225166 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5010788719 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.117647059 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148919230053 0.272083759551 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622483460523 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714864670728 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105004421214 0.162205337803 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862311985761 0.0443174109184 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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