The passage states several beliefs about surprising elephant behaviors. However, the professor says that there is misleading about the elephant behaviors, and she refutes each of the passage belief.
Firstly, the professor states that elephants know that they are nearing to the end of their life, and they demonstrate this awareness by breaking away from their herds and going off to certain location near water. However, the professor claims that when elephants became old, chewing process by their teeth become so hard so old elephants tend to vegetation to eat, and the vegetation area are near water. That's why, it is just an assuming that elephants break away from their herd because they are aware of approaching die.
Secondly, the passage states that elephants seem to have artistic ability because they can be taught to hold a paintbrush. However, the professor says that elephants ear are so sensitive so it is easy to train elephants the painting tricks, and that encouraged by teaching. Therefore, elephants do not have artistic ability. They are trained to do the required artist.
Thirdly, the passage states that elephants have a fear of mice as they back away from mice. However, the professor claims that it is not about elephants fearing of mice. It is just elephants are not familiar to them by their natural instinct because elephants live in forests or cages and not react to mice. That's why; elephants have not a fear of mice.
- Some teenagers take part in different kinds of activities such as musical classes, sports classes and so on, but others only focus on one activity which is important to them. Which idea do you support? 70
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- Do you agree or disagree with this following statement,the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reason and example to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree? Rather than help children with their schoolwork, parents should encourage their children do their work independently. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...and the vegetation area are near water. Thats why, it is just an assuming that elepha...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elephants'' or 'elephant's'?
Suggestion: elephants'; elephant's
...brush. However, the professor says that elephants ear are so sensitive so it is easy to t...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...forests or cages and not react to mice. Thats why; elephants have not a fear of mice....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 242.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01239669421 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51515792697 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487603305785 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0700484043 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3076923077 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16800518185 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789667068809 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383170046584 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107990122596 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340632415824 0.0443174109184 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.