Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is important for everyone to have healthy relationships to build a healthy life emotionally and physically. But, there is a debate on telling the truth always will help to strengthen any relationship or not. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, always telling the truth will boost the transparency in any relationship, and then the relationship will last for a long time. As people who lie in little things, they are accustomed to lie permanently. For instance, My parents got through divorce when I was ten years old. My father was a manipulative man. My mother told me that he was lying in little things in their first years of marriage but she was forgiving him and giving him a chance to change to better. But unfortunately, his lying turned to a habit, and he tried to conceal his lying in a deceptive way. He started to hide all his possessing from us and claimed that he did not have any money, but after my mother discovered his lying, she turned to a divorce. The relationship between my mom and dad was full of tension and instability, so their relationship became apart easily because of lying. That's why; telling the truth is so essential to make any relationship strong and long-lasting.
Second of all, always telling the truth is so important to enhance the trust between the members of the relationship. For instance, I have a friend that we never lie to each other. I appreciate her truth when I ask her opinion of my looking and she told me that I look bad or my clothes are not good because she wants me to look better. I appreciate her truth. Also, we have been with each other for ten years and she has never lied to me so I feel comfortable to tell her my secrets and she the same thing because we value our relationship and always tell the truth to each other.
To sum up, although there is many arguments about always telling the truth in a relationship, but I support the statement that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people for two reasons, to strengthen the relationship and to enhance the trust between the relationship's members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'help'.
Suggestion: will always help
... there is a debate on telling the truth always will help to strengthen any relationship or not. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ansparency in any relationship, and then the relationship will last for a long ti...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to lying'.
Suggestion: accustomed to lying
...ople who lie in little things, they are accustomed to lie permanently. For instance, My parents g...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a deceptive way" with adverb for "deceptive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...abit, and he tried to conceal his lying in a deceptive way. He started to hide all his possessing ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...p became apart easily because of lying. Thats why; telling the truth is so essential ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uth when I ask her opinion of my looking and she told me that I look bad or my cl...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...h other for ten years and she has never lied to me so I feel comfortable to tell her...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are many arguments'?
Suggestion: there are many arguments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, then, as for, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64891041162 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85455211469 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438256658596 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6996790051 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.052631579 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290490017751 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1053718125 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138707792564 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237776590199 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122947376877 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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