Ingrate the author's view and lecturer's opinion.
The reading text and lecture are both about the emperor penguin and about it is unique creature on the earth. The lecturer is cast many doubt on the statement made by the author in the reading passage.
Firstly, the author of this article state that penguins are monogamous in nature. On the other hand the Lecturer is says that most of the time these penguine is monogamous. Additionally,she state that if these penguine does not find their previous partener then he find out new partener for matting. as a result of that penguine is known as a "serial monogamous"
Secondly, The article mention that emperor penguine is able to find their own rookery. But lecturer oppose this statement by giving her own opinion. She says that latest study of university is showing that many penguine is unab to find their own hatching site. Moreover, She include that because of this phenomena the major relocation of the community is happens.
Finally, The author believe that penguine is not endangered specises and not protected under the international law. Whereas, the lecturer says that nowadays this penguine is dangered species and protected under the international law. On top of that, she mention that population of this species will expected to reduce by 1/3 in the end of this century. This is due to the climate change.
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- Directions You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage Typicall 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ique creature on the earth. The lecturer is cast many doubt on the statement made...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , she
...ese penguine is monogamous. Additionally,she state that if these penguine does not f...
^^^^
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...ot find their previous partener then he find out new partener for matting. as a resu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...n he find out new partener for matting. as a result of that penguine is known as ...
^^
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...artener for matting. as a result of that penguine is known as a 'serial mono...
^^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a result of that penguine is known as a 'serial monogamous' Second...
^
Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... many penguine is unab to find their own hatching site. Moreover, She include tha...
^^
Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'includes'.
Suggestion: includes
...their own hatching site. Moreover, She include that because of this phenomena the maj...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
.... Moreover, She include that because of this phenomena the major relocation of the ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e include that because of this phenomena the major relocation of the community is...
^^
Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
... international law. On top of that, she mention that population of this species will ex...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 300, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'expect'
Suggestion: expect
...on that population of this species will expected to reduce by 1/3 in the end of this cen...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, then, whereas, as a result, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 223.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03139013453 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73857790917 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511210762332 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4896917297 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3076923077 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132562785383 0.272083759551 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579493153254 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646879945432 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875284690521 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397331208882 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.