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The reading claims that some historians have expressed doubts that Peary did in fact reach the North Pole, and provides three reasons of support. In contrast, the professor states that there is no solid evidence and the arguments in the passage are not convincing, and she refutes each of the author's reasons.

First, the article avers that the National Geographic Society put together a committee that was instructed to conduct a thorough investigation of Peary's record and equipment and they found the Peary's account is true. However, the professor opposes this point by stating that it is true that The National Society declared that, but their report was not objective. In fact, she mentions that the members of the National Society are friends of Peary and the investigation is done in two days which is impossible to do, so the Peary's records didn't examine carefully. She states that the National Society is baise and their investigation is not true.

Second, the passage posits that a recent expedition by Tom provides support of Peary's claim that he reached the Pole in only 37 days. Conversely, the lecturer counters this point by saying that the dogsled used by Tom is less in weight than Peary's dogsled because Peary took with him food and the weather was harsh. Actually, Tom didn't transport food with him and the weather condition is better so the speed is different to Peary.

Third, the passage asserts that there are photographs taken by Peary that support his claim to have reached the North of Pole. On the other hand, the professor casts doubt on this point by explaining that photographs are not approved that he reached the Pole. According to the professor, Peary used primitive camera that takes fossy pictures and the photographs were faded and blurrd, so shade in the pictures can't use tot calculate the Surf's position. They are not confident about the photogarphs.

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and the investigation is done in two days which is impossible to do,
Description: can you re-write this sentence?

the National Society is baise
the National Society is in bias

Sentence: She states that the National Society is baise and their investigation is not true.
Error: baise Suggestion: bias

Sentence: According to the professor, Peary used primitive camera that takes fossy pictures and the photographs were faded and blurrd, so shade in the pictures can't use tot calculate the Surf's position.
Error: fossy Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: tot Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: blurrd Suggestion: blurred

Sentence: They are not confident about the photogarphs.
Error: photogarphs Suggestion: photographs

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No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 320 250
Around 250 words wanted

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Score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 320 250
No. of Characters: 1550 1200
No. of Different Words: 158 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.229 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.844 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.495 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.702 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.612 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.213 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4