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The reading claims that nuclear energy must be seen as the solution to replace it with fossil fuels and provides three reasons of support. On the other hand, the professor states that this idea is not premature and he refutes each of the author's reasons.
To begin with, the article avers that the fuel powers nuclear power plants is cheap compared to the fossil fuels. While, the lecture opposes this point by stating that it is not cheap. He says that the building of power plants takes time and experts compared to fossil fuels. In fact, he confirms that a lot of money spend to build these powers and the legislation of the government required these companies to add an emergence plan to protect residents so this has a significant cost compared to fossil fuels.
Second, the article posits that the process of creating nuclear energy is relatively safe. Conversely, the lecturer counters this point by explaining that accidents still happen. Actually, he mentions that even though the equipment prevent any catastrophe, it still have a devastating to the society. He gives an example to illustrate this. He says that in pyneslvenia powers plant released a small amount of radiation and it didn't threaten the people, but it costed one billlion dollars. In addition, he states the the psychological of the public was sever.
Third, the passage asserts that the radioactive waste can be managed. In contrast, the professor casts doubt on this point by telling us that the waste is not easy to manage. He says that during processing, high amount of radioactive substances are produced and during reprocessing, potanium is released, which is used to made nuclear weapon, and it is a difficult task if it exposed to theft. He says that after reprocessing a high quantity of waste still remain and it has to bury under ground which is a very hard task. Besides that, if apropriate place is found, the citizens stopped this action through legal action.
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the fuel that powers nuclear
the fuel that powers nuclear power plants is cheap compared to the fossil
fuel powers nuclear power plants is cheap compared to the fossil fuels
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it is a difficult task if it exposed to theft.
it is a difficult task if it is exposed to theft.
a high quantity of waste still remain and
a high quantity of waste still remains and
Sentence: He says that in pyneslvenia powers plant released a small amount of radiation and it didn't threaten the people, but it costed one billlion dollars.
Error: billlion Suggestion: billion
Sentence: He says that during processing, high amount of radioactive substances are produced and during reprocessing, potanium is released, which is used to made nuclear weapon, and it is a difficult task if it exposed to theft.
Error: potanium Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Besides that, if apropriate place is found, the citizens stopped this action through legal action.
Error: apropriate Suggestion: appropriate
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 17 12
No. of Words: 332 250
No. of Characters: 1582 1200
No. of Different Words: 180 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.269 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.765 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.522 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.529 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.664 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.824 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.508 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.179 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4