integrated essay TPO 26
In this set of material, the article mainly discusses that the zebra mussel is native in Eastern Europe that speeded and reached part of North America, and provide 3 reasons to support the it has the important damages for populations freshwater’s fish in North America. However, the speaker believes that there are not clear reasons from threaten of zebra mussel for native fish and he does not agree with the author’s view and offer some reasons.
First of all, the reading states that the history of zebra mussel recommend that release of its unstoppable. While, the lecture claims that about this animal is true that could not control like past due to less of acknowledges’ people. There are effective ways to control of spreading by ships in a new locations. The one way is transport by balance water of ships, it is better to using salt water of ocean instead of freshwater that will kill zebra.
Secondly, the text asserts that when zebra carry in a new habitat, it quickly dominate because there is not any predator for it. On the other hand, the professor argues that in the beginning of appearance of zebra in a novel place maybe not exist its predators but after that decline food resources and zebra become notable for some animals such as birds and they change their habit and will attract to zebra.
Finally, the massage states that zebra decrease overall fish population in habitats where prevailing by eating plankton and compete with fish’s food. The speaker supports that this is true zebra has a negative impact on plankton and then on fish, but zebra has a positive effect on fish by eating plankton and producing more nutrients and fall into bottom on water where fish can use this source.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this set of material, the article mai...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...erica, and provide 3 reasons to support the it has the important damages for populatio...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'location'?
Suggestion: location
... control of spreading by ships in a new locations. The one way is transport by balance wa...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ead of freshwater that will kill zebra. Secondly, the text asserts that when zeb...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dominates'?
Suggestion: dominates
...ebra carry in a new habitat, it quickly dominate because there is not any predator for i...
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Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n water where fish can use this source.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 296.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86824324324 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55274660872 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7717492765 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.1 110.228320801 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 21.698381199 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06452816374 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427772935872 0.272083759551 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159801269473 0.0996497079465 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606861595352 0.0662205650399 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23392859416 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396800900067 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.3589403974 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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