integrated essay tpo19
In the reading passage, the writer claims that buzzers has many critics and should be banned. The speaker, however, thinks that buzzers do not have such lacks as the writer says. And he uses the following three reasons to support his view.
First, although the writer says that customers will get wrong information if they do not know whether a person be paid to praise the product, the speaker argues that it seems that the buzzers do not give customers true information, but in fact, it is the company that pays to those people who really buy the product, and paise highly to the service and quality of the product. So, the information be given by these buzzers is often reliable.
Second, contrary to the statement of the writer that costumers listen to the buzzer with less critically, the speaker thinks that customers often buy the product after they try it, only if it is good, they will buy it.
Finally, the writer states that customers will become less trustful to the people around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le who really buy the product, and paise highly to the service and quality of the...
^^
Line 9, column 72, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... customers will become less trustful to the people around them.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 30.3222958057 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 175.0 270.72406181 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78285714286 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27450106662 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 145.348785872 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 419.366225166 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.150499824 49.2860985944 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297913294918 0.272083759551 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122330455275 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771640283326 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164586775624 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709868607749 0.0443174109184 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 63.6247240618 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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