integrated task
The reading asserts that it is impossible to maintain a permanent human life on venuse due to some difficulties. The lecturer however finds the idea dubious and casts doubt on the reasons proposed by the reading passage.The lecturer confirms that there is some challenges in living on this planet but by establishing a floating station in 50 killometer above the atmospher the problems would be solved.
First the author argues that since the atmosphere pressure at venus surface is much greater than that of earth, all spacecrafts would be crushed while are landing. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that the aformentiond solution would be omit this occuring because of the much lower atmosphere above the surface, in 50 killometer hieght.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that not only there is no water storage on venus but also the atmosphere contains some compound chemichals with no oxygene and water. In addition importing water from earth is an impractical idea for solving this matter. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that althogh there is no water on the surface of venus, the water could be produced out of chemical coumpounds making up atmosphere such as carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid in the station so there is no need to supply water from earth.
Finally,the reading asserts that the thick clouds in the atmosphere leads to passing only 40% of sunlight into the venus surface and consequencely 60% of sunlight reflect back. In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that the clouds in 50 killometers higher than surface are not very thick wich allow more amount of sunlight to pass through. In addition, the more electricity could be generated from the solar power from above and from the reflection of it inorder to power the station.
The reading asserts that it is impossible to maintain a permanent human life on venuse due to some difficulties. The lecturer however finds the idea dubious and casts doubt on the reasons proposed by the reading passage.The lecturer confirms that there is some challenges in living on this planet but by establishing a floating station in 50 killometer above the atmospher the problems would be solved.
First the author argues that since the atmosphere pressure at venus surface is much greater than that of earth, all spacecrafts would be crushed while are landing. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that the aformentiond solution would be omit this occuring because of the much lower atmosphere above the surface, in 50 killometer hieght.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that not only there is no water storage on venus but also the atmosphere contains some compound chemichals with no oxygene and water. In addition importing water from earth is an impractical idea for solving this matter. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that althogh there is no water on the surface of venus, the water could be produced out of chemical coumpounds making up atmosphere such as carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid in the station so there is no need to supply water from earth.
Finally,the reading asserts that the thick clouds in the atmosphere leads to passing only 40% of sunlight into the venus surface and consequencely 60% of sunlight reflect back. In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that the clouds in 50 killometers higher than surface are not very thick wich allow more amount of sunlight to pass through. In addition, the more electricity could be generated from the solar power from above and from the reflection of it inorder to power the station.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...reasons proposed by the reading passage.The lecturer confirms that there is some ch...
^^^
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reasons proposed by the reading passage.The lecturer confirms that there is some ch...
^^^
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some challenges'?
Suggestion: there are some challenges
...ding passage.The lecturer confirms that there is some challenges in living on this planet but by establi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...hemichals with no oxygene and water. In addition importing water from earth is an imprac...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...eed to supply water from earth. Finally,the reading asserts that the thick clouds i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in addition, in contrast, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 303.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04620462046 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67366252223 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8226495712 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.9 110.228320801 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 21.698381199 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06452816374 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264108332791 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116007221384 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152662176666 0.0662205650399 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188518567314 0.162205337803 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.224420124642 0.0443174109184 506% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.3589403974 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.