The reading and the lecture both about using of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico where called the "great houses". The author of the reading argues that how people use theese buildings. Author talks about three debate thories which the lecturer contradicts theese theories.
To begin with , the author argues that Chaco structures were only residentral ,in which hosted many people. Also he or she suggest that idea with similarity of Chaco houses to aparment buildings at Taos where poeple have been living for many years. However , this specific argument challenged by the lecturer. She claims that buildings look like an apartment from outside ; however , it is enermous for family requirements from inside. Additionally , she says that there are extra stoves what it is serve for hundreds of poeple. This is because she thinks that buildings could not used primarily for residential.
Secondly , the writer suggest Chaco constractions were used like a store for food supplies. In the article , it is said that grain maize important crop for Chaco people , which it could be store in the warehouse. The lecturer , however , rebuts this by mentioning that theese storages were uncovered. Thats why warehouses could not used for storing foods.
Thirdly , the author contend that Chaco structures used as ceremonial hall. He or she assists that idea with broken pots which found in structure during the excavations.Moreover , it is stated in the article that theese broken pots show that people ate food and rejected the pots at the special ceremonies. Nevertheless , the lecturer contradicts this opinion and says that there are many construction tools and other materials. This argument displays that there could be alteration.
Finally , the author posits that Chaco structures were used like residental , store and ceremonial centers. In contrast , the lecturer contradics theese theories and gives examples why Chaco buildings could not be used for store , activity hall or residential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 311.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3729903537 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80971051104 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4116628348 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9473684211 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 4.19205298013 716% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979732801195 0.272083759551 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327252542744 0.0996497079465 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543196810883 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627229838717 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038048892236 0.0443174109184 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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