Integrated writing (TPO 49)
In the reading section, the writer claims that humpback whales may navigate by the stars in order to migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes because of their high intelligence, ability to migrate in straight lines, and a unique ability to look upward. However, in the lecture, the professor casts doubt on the reading points by stating that all of these explanations are fascinating, but they are not very convincing.
First of all, the writer contends that humpback whales seem to be intelligent enough to use stars to navigate by. In contrast, the lecturer asserts that although humpback whales are intelligent, scientists did not find a direct relation between intelligence and navigational skills. Also, scientists found a type of duck which is not very intelligent but can use stars for navigation. As a result, the ability to use stars for navigation and intelligence is not really connected.
Furthermore, contrary to the idea in the reading section suggesting that humpback whales migrate in straight lines, and just the animals which can use some external objects can maintain their movement in straight lines, the professor mentions that humpback whales may use another ability to move in straight lines. He states that humpback whales have bio-magnet in their brains. Thus, this component can help them to use earth's magnetic field to move in straight lines for long distances.
In addition, even though the writer mentions that humpback whales are sometimes look upward in the sky for minutes at a time which is called spy-hopping, they lecturer mentions that other animals use this method for other purposes rather than navigation. He mentions that sharks use spy-hopping to look for animals they want to hunt. Also, humpback whales use spy-hopping during day times which no stars can be seen in the sky.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should not make an important decision alone. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past it was easier to identify which type of career or job lead you to a successful future. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'looked'.
Suggestion: looked
...ions that humpback whales are sometimes look upward in the sky for minutes at a time...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, look, may, really, so, thus, in addition, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 298.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1610738255 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70723647259 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486577181208 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7281840589 49.2860985944 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.545705969889 0.272083759551 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207113570048 0.0996497079465 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785990832311 0.0662205650399 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332775236195 0.162205337803 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332916058313 0.0443174109184 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.