lake and salt
According to the reading, the lecture states that The Salton Sea is a salty lake. Its level of salinity is increasing gradually which leads to become a dead zone in which no fish, and bird population can live. The professor states that the announcement's idea is unrealistic, and it is unpractical. He refutes each of the author's solutions.
First, the reading states that one of the ways to decrease the amount of salt in the lake is using of some desalination equipment into which water would be pumped, and heated. The professor opposes this idea, and states that this solution can cause serious problems because after evaporating the water, solid material is remained at the bottom of the equipment. So if the wind blows, and spreads these harmful chemicals it may cause harmful effects on people, and leads to some serious health problems.
Second, the reading says that another way is to bring ocean's water by canals, and pipelines to the like, so by doing this job, the concentration of salt in the water will decrease. However, the professor refutes this idea by saying that it is not a practical work because building pipes, and canals may cost a lot, and local governments cannot afford it.
Moreover, the reading explains that by building walls just for dividing the lake in to different parts may be another reasonable idea, and do some controlling actions in order to control lake's salinity. Nevertheless, the professor argues that idea, and mentions that although this solution is better than the other ones, it is a short-term solution. Before attempting to build this walls they should do some geological studying in order to provide some facts about the happening of earthquake since earthquake can deteriorate the wall, and produce a massive disaster. For places like Japan in which earthquake happens regularly, it will not be a good solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'announcements'' or 'announcement's'?
Suggestion: announcements'; announcement's
...an live. The professor states that the announcements idea is unrealistic, and it is unpracti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 312.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1858974359 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88563372338 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.51434878587 792% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0769902651 49.2860985944 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.8 110.228320801 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 21.698381199 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147449893591 0.272083759551 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053354289754 0.0996497079465 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731098344549 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807753334788 0.162205337803 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230323812541 0.0443174109184 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.3589403974 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.8541721854 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 63.6247240618 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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