Making new friends is more vital than keeping old friends
Some people hold the view that it is more dominant to keep old friends than to make new friends. While as far as I am concerned, it is significant to meet new people and make new friends.
Without question, keeping old friends is one of predominant affairs to do, but this not to say you are supposed to spend more time on it than on making new friends. Those old friends who deserve to keep always not cost you too much time. Sometimes, a break time with a cup of tea, a festival card or a phone call are enough to keep your friendship.
It is unavoidable to meet new people and make new friends in a new environment is of great important to an individual. Take me as an example, after attend to my college, I meet quite a lot of new persons, new dormmates, new classmates, new teachers, and new peers have the same interests. Communicating with these people and making friends with them broadening/expanding your horizons, taking pleasure to you and giving you assistance when you are in trouble. While the old friends may be far away from you and cannot give you help on time, or they may just cannot understand your situation as you undergo different things.
It is a wonderful experience to make new friends. As the saying goes, one more friend, one more way. When I feel terrible about my study, lots of students work or something else, it is my friends recently made in my college that company with me, provide useful suggestions to me and help me out. On the other hand, my friends get my help as well. And I gain a feeling of fulfillment after making these lovely friends and helping them.
In a nutshell, important as keeping old friends is, making new friends does matter better, especially the around environment changing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'keep'.
Suggestion: always keep
...iends. Those old friends who deserve to keep always not cost you too much time. Sometimes, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58146964856 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71662827887 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511182108626 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4001406468 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509919770284 0.272083759551 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206171890553 0.0996497079465 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138925739492 0.0662205650399 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339844108469 0.162205337803 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794123367758 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.42419426049 81% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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